Tuesday, 30 August 2016

Speech

Have you ever thought it takes seven seconds to make a judgment about a person because of
their deformed face let's think about this seven seconds i mean really this is life changing opportunity in seven seconds think about it how quick seven seconds is I mean do you go to the toilet for seven seconds no that's just
rong . 
If you make a judgmental about a person because of their  deformed face put yourself in their shoes would 
You like it if you were labeled no I guess not so just don't think about the judgment . 
When you see someone with
a deformed face it doesn't mean you can't be their friend so just imagine their deformed face is not here.judgments
can hurt people we are all humans but our faces are different so you need time to get to know people. 

Last year we   a book about boy his name was wonder he wasn't a really flash kid because of his deformed face. 
My uncle to has a deformed face but I don't judge him because he's my uncle. 
If i make a judgment about 
him I will be the worst nephew ever but that doesn't matter . Imagine walking into a sho

   

Monday, 25 July 2016

Persuasive Writing

Did you know it takes seven seconds to make a judgement about a person. We especially have to keep our thoughts in our head because our thoughts can hurt people's feelings and they will not feel welcome. Last year we read a book about a boy who had a deformed face. When he first walked into the classroom people thought that he would never get a friend because of his deformed face. If we start saying bad comments others will follow for example one time at church me and my cousin Vula were being naughty then my uncle said not do that because other kids will follow and will get hurt and it will be all your fault and you will get blamed. So next time forget about their deformed face and the house they live in and just be their friend.


Sunday, 15 May 2016

Spotlight

 The lights flash like prison spotlights looking for prisoners.
 The focussed parents spectate the game.
 Obstacles shield people.
 The towering Eucalyptus tree protects people from
 the lights.
 The treacherous flying fox platform appears out of nowhere.

Sunday, 13 March 2016

                                     popcorn writing

Looking at Mrs Reynolds pour the seeds
into the popcorn maker was so mouthwatering.
As we started to smell the popcorn joy filled my heart. We stared in wonder at the popcorn flying like superman in the air. As soon as it hit my mouth I was so wide eyed. It was puffy as a cloud and   as
 chewy gum.
 
 

popcorn writing

                                     popcorn writing

Looking at Mrs Reynolds pour the seeds
into the popcorn maker was so mouthwatering.
As We started to smell the popcorn joy filled my heart. We stared in wonder at the popcorn flying like superman in the air. As soon as it hit my mouth I was so wide eyed. It was puffy as a cloud and  chuwy as gum.
 
 

Thursday, 19 November 2015

Best Day

It was a bright, hot day on Saturday a good day to go fishing my dad said in a happy voice. So I flashed to get dressed in my fishing gear. When we got there I  zoomed to the doc and got out my fishing rod and bait from my fishing box. After 3 minutes I felt a tug and then I called my dad to get  the net. After we caught the fish we went home. The important part was when we spent time together as a family.